You seem to have a pretty good grasp of melody, rhythm and harmony. This is quite well arranged and it seems like you've thought it through, but it still needs some polishing.
The lead sound is alright at first but gets a bit stale after a while. You could either use another lead and alternate parts between them or something, or you could just automate a filter on it or something like that. It might sound good with a tiny amount of reverb too.
I really like what the drums are playing. It's kind of metalish at parts and the end is great. However, the actual drum sounds aren't that great. You could work with them until you make them sound better or you could just get some new ones.
The main problem though is that it kind of needs more content. I don't mean make it longer, just some more things would be nice. You could have a pad coming in towards the end, for example.
Hope that helps :)
Pretty good tune you've got here.
There's a good selection of sounds; I especially like the bass and the lo-fi retro thing fitted in nicely too. I actually quite like the drums, particularly the kick actually. The stuttery bits in the main lead were pretty nice too.
However, it was a bit 'thin' at parts. A pad or something and maybe another leadish sound would have been nice. The main lead sound plays all the way through and plays pretty much the same thing the whole time. A bit of variation could be good and I also find that cutting a part out entirely for a section makes it have more effect when it comes back.
Overall I enjoyed it as it is though :)
meaaaan bass noise. nice crackles. nice drums. appropriate title. liked it (:
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